Tuesday, 25 June 2013

My Writing Analysis

A Run in the Mist:


Walking out the door, the bitterly cold air hits me, dragon fumes come out my nose as I take the first step. The pace quickens as I watch the just-risen sun glistening on the morning dew. The sharp wind hits my legs like a thousand miniscule daggers. I run faster and faster leaving behind the misery from deaths that have been recently known. I push out the thoughts of despair along with the ongoing pain. Tire, anguish and heartache empower me. I have to stop; my breathlessness and sobs can’t be fixed by a run in the mist.
Analysis:
A lot of people have really depressing and serious things they have to face and deal with everyday. Sometimes, it can be unimaginable or impossible to even begin working through them. I wrote this piece because I wanted to explore that area of life and why people feel the need to try and run away from it all. Sometimes these issues and the weight it has on people, after a while can just be so heavy and difficult to deal with, they need to run. The girl in this piece is struggling with some problems and quite literally runs away. In the end, she realizes that the misery and anguish no matter where she goes.

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